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New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully.
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Been lurking here for a long time (on a different account). My ambition is to write some quality erotica... but I don't actually have any experience with that kind of thing. :22:

Anyway, sometimes words speak louder than... other words, so here's the prologue for my story, fresh out of MS Word. I'd appreciate any critiques or proofreading before I officially post it in the stories area. Wink

Oh yah, the story's main theme is girls with superpowers (but not superheros and supervillians). So the prologue includes that, as well as masturbation, over-sized cocks, excessive cum, and cum-milking.

I hope you enjoy it.

(Phew, I'm going to bed, hopefully I'm too tired to be nervous).



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New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully. - by Lex_Ray - 11th August 2010, 07:55
New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully. - by alarmguy - 11th August 2010, 09:34
New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully. - by The Guardian - 11th August 2010, 11:44
New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully. - by AstroForce - 11th August 2010, 13:43
New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully. - by vella - 11th August 2010, 15:35
New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully. - by Lex_Ray - 11th August 2010, 18:54
New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully. - by zebeianhero - 11th August 2010, 20:04
New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully. - by Lex_Ray - 12th August 2010, 00:09
New Writer... Maybe, Hopefully. - by blackshark - 12th August 2010, 12:39

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