Feeling Strange

Story by Keahi19

Disclaimer: This story is based on a bad rewrite to a manga and I do not own nor do I profess to own the rights or tribulations on the original idea of a female attempt to overtake society and make girls into hermaphrodites. That is the manga's rewrite and I have not only used their science, but the original scene.

That being said, it is not exactly the same as I not only own the main charecter (Who is based on myself and therefore is impossible to be copyrights because no one owns me, but me. And my friend owns himself.) Therefore any statements that it is "Exactly the Same" will be subsequently squashed as spurious.

While those who read the first two chapters may say it's very similar, this is intentional, I am not writing a totally 100% original peice, but expanding on something that has been extremelly underrepresented. The process. Usually on these issues the process is left out for male bashing, or for a failure of the system. This story is to eleviate and to open a whole new side. MY CHARECTER IS 100% MINE!! This world while started by a manga is also developing in later chapters as uniquely my own. I am neither making money, or a living from this story. Therefore I invite all those who wish to get through the first citated part of the story for my own unique take, then enjoy. For those who just want to not even read the whole way and accuse me of plagerism. Get out of my thread please. Now for all new readers, than you and we will begin: Feeling Strange.

Disclaimer: THis does have loli in it, this is a story and therefore not a fantasy or anything of mine, but part of the literary work. All charecters are fictional and any link to any real person are unintentional and coinicidental. Therefore remember its a work of fiction. Okie enough legal stuff, here is the stories.

And this is for ALL stories. Not just the ones directly underneath this warning.

I would also like to add that neither the author, nor anyone else here says that genocide, or gendercide are good or anything else. In fact the story will end that will show that the fanatics of either side are clearly wrong. Only by combining together can men or women truly succeed. That's the message at the end of this story, and no matter what you should know that's where it's headed. It just needs to get through some dark roads to get to the sun. Because it's literary. It is not fact, nor is it meant to say that it's what should really happen. I repeat not what should really happen. It's a way of getting somewhere.

Feeling Strange Chapter 1:

I let out one long yawn as I walked towards school. It's sort of a long walk in winter, and being forced into a school uniform isn't something you want to wear. It's been a much colder year than normal, so the jackets and scarves don't exactly keep me warm enough. I held my arms tightly to myself as best I could while keeping an arm on my backpack.

The wind picked up a few feet from the school doors, and I made sure to run as quickly as possible to avoid it, feeling the gate nearing my back as it closed. I shivered again to think about the punishment. These Japanese are odd when it comes to discipline.

Oh right I didn't introduce myself. I'm Victoria Santuse, or Vicki to my friends. Though I have to admit I don't have many friends considering I am American in a Japanese school. A few girls have befriended me despite the culturual distaste for people not born in the country. I don't get to see them until after homeroom, however, as we don't have the same classes this year.

At 15 I must say I've developed nicely. I have a pair of B-cup breasts and tower even the boys in our class at 5 foot 7. The other girls are barely developing and alot shorter than me. I don't mind as most of them shun me anyways and stick to their own groups. In my class, I have to admit to having only one friend.

He's Jesse, ok he's the shorter boy in the corner reading a manga in Japanese at the doorstep. I can speak it rather well with my parents having taken me here about seven years ago. However, I haven't been here as long as Jesse, so I can't read it very well. "Hey Jesse." I said as I replaced my shoes and put them into the cupboard. He gave me a curt nod, clearly into his manga. I yanked it out of his hands, smiling all the way as I looked at it. "Isn't this a girl's manga?" I asked with a raised eyebrow, having said that in English. Jesse used Japanese as often as possible, but I on the other hand had learned English first and decided to use it when we were talking. I got better grades than him in English class because of it.

"HEY!! I can read it." Jesse said as he yanked it out of my hands. He's still 14, though he's only a few months younger than me. "Besides, shouldn't you be going to the gym?"

I raised an eyebrow. "What do you mean?"

He let out one long sigh. "Vicki you never learn. It's that special gym class seminar. Only for girls,

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