Agents of Phalanx

Story by Middlesex

The beginning of a work in progress. Just some world building to set the stage for some superheroic futa action.

Ch 1 (no sex, hints of things to come)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zj2fJFvOz5KLcjMBEnkI9FO29jrJP1hQJGX0jXcd4Q0/edit?usp=sharing

Commentary is welcome. What I'm hoping to pull off here is less crime-fighting and more of a slice of life behind the scenes of a super-team, where all the private stuff happens. My biggest concern is if I can switch out PoV characters from chapter to chapter without the whole thing feeling weird and disjointed. Chapter 2 is probably going to feature the Captain, for instance. Could be awkward though. This is my first writing project that's gotten this far, really, so I'm not sure what I'm getting myself into.