Fallout Futanari

Story by Rebecca Futanari

This is a story I've been working on through Hentai Foundry, It's my first attempt at writing poor so don't expect anything awesome. I've only completed one chapter so far but I'm looking for feedback on how I can improve it. or on suggestions for future chapters. I'll hopefully have more soon and hopefully the link will update it self, otherwise I'll repost or update the thread. I hope you enjoy and want to hear back from anyone who reads it. thank you

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/RebeccaDaFuta/22066/Fallout-Futanari