Little House of Whore'ers
Story by the_red_hobgoblin
Sorry for the cheesy title. Meh. This is a new story I thought up. The inspiration kinda came from From Dusk til Dawn, but instead of vampires and Quentin Tarentino's terrible acting, its going to be about a nice quaint little whore house in mexico that is run by various monster themed futa exotic dancers that lure hapless college kids visiting Cancun for spring break to be their victims. Not going to be big on gore or anything, but it will have a lot of domination and rough futa on male and female. Not a happy ending for the victims either (i.e. no hapless romance, no one who enters the brothel will be getting out to tell others). The different sexy monster themes will also let me write stuff that can cover a bunch of different specific fetishes. And I can keep retelling the story with new victims. This is probably going to be the story I focus on most and hope to keep adding chapters over time.
Try to ignore the fact that Dave is an idiot and keeps refusing the women he meets. The guys an idiot. Can't wait to write him out....
Anyways, let me know what you think and let me know if you think any of the girls should get fleshed out more or have a future chapter focus on one of them. Plus I can always add more monster themed futas. Suggestions are welcome. Any feedback is welcome, but if you are just gonna say it sucks don't bother, store policy: No baseless complaints about free fap material. Constructive criticism only if you want to point out flaws.
Update 1: Here are some drawings I did for the 5 girls so far (Lilly, Mia & Lia, Shizu, and Zinnia):
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Without further ado, here is:
Part I: Chapter 1
(No sex and no overt futa material either...sorry. Just introducing characters, setting the mood, checking out strippers, good times)
Chapter 1: Intro
Spring break could not have come soon enough. Dave and eleven of his frat brothers had planned an epic trip down to Cancun as well as thousands of other college students looking to blow off some steam. The nights were wild and the days were a blur of drugs, alcohol, and women of all shapes and sizes. It was the greatest vacation ever.
The week was winding down to an end, and with the impending close of the legendary week of parties everyone was frantically searching for one more epic grand finale to give their debauchery a proper send off. After being invited to several events that promised to be the greatest rager that ever was, Dave’s frat brothers had decided to take some of the girls they had met and partied with go somewhere off the beaten path. A couple of the frat brothers had met a beautiful big breasted, wide hips with a round well-proportioned ass local girl at a popular night spot. She told them of a secret party spot off the beaten path that the most gorgeous local women frequented and promised them that she would personally show them all a good time that they could never imagine.
Dave was apprehensive about going outside of the main Cancun party area. He had heard rumors of college kids being taken advantage of, robbed, or worse when they wandered too far from the large crowds. But his comrades were too full of liquor and weed, as well as an abundance of bravado, and demanded that they all go and have an experience beyond what the rest of the young party goers were sharing.
So on that last night of their trip, the twelve frat brothers as well as eight girls they had swayed into joining them took in a party bus away from the bright lights and loud thumping music coming from the main streets and clubs that they had torn through all week, and instead headed down a dirt road off into the night. The bus shook and swayed as they made their way through the night.
Dave had volunteered to drive the bus there, and would more than likely stay sober long enough to ensure they could get back. Dave felt his apprehension build again as fewer and fewer lights could be seen in the distance and the headlights seemed to struggle to pierce the darkness before him. The rest of the partiers were hooting and singing, drinking from the many bottles they had brought with them to ensure the good times did not end. Music blasted throughout, the girls gave false shrieks of distress as one of the more drunk bros pulled them into their lap; a game they played as they flirted with each other through their intoxicated haze.
The darkness seemed all around Dave. The headlights struggling to pierce further into the night than a couple feet. To Dave it was chilling…unnatural. Just as he thought they had gone in the wrong direction, and was about to turn the bus around and take them back, he saw a single glowing light far off in the distance in the direction the road was taking them. The closer he got the stranger it seemed. The building came into
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