I had the time to do something porn related, and I decided to flex my writing muscle a little. This is only the rough draft (as I haven't even proofread it yet), but I was wondering if it was at all good. As you'll see, I tried to add in a little symbolism which really restricted some word play, forcing me to limit the description a bit. I'll probably rework big parts of it. At first I wanted to leave everyone anonymous (I intentionally didn't describe the little girls' appearance), wanting it to make more of an impact later. But that may have been a mistake. Eh, nothing wrong with a little experimenting. This idea floated up to the top of my story idea list recently. I really liked the humiliation aspect of it, but I might start over from a nicer encouraging perspective, as that is more of my wheelhouse (at least when it comes to porn). Anywho, tell me how much it sucks lol
