Sisters' Secrets (extended directors cut with deleted scenes!)

Story by andromeda

Here's Sisters' Secrets the way it was originally written- and the way it was meant to be read! I hated having to cut so much out and I couldn't wait for the contest to be over so I could publish this!

Thank you to EVERYBODY who voted for me and thank you to all the writers. I really enjoyed everyone's work and am honored to be part of such a talented community!! :D

So, what's the difference between the entry cut and the extended cut? Well, there was a whole scene in the doctor's office I wrote to get "warmed up" for the main event which had to get axed in its entirety. That's in this version. Also, the sex scene in the entry version was 2,207 words long, compared to 3,812 words for this version. That's over 1,600 words of pure sex (including an anal scene, a 69 scene, and several mid-fuck blowjobs) that had to get cut which now appear here.

I will answer questions raised by reviewers in the contest thread. I addressed some of them as I was editing, others might be answered in the deleted scenes- regardless, thanks again to everyone for such a great, positive experience!! :)

For the heck of it here's a detailed rundown of the differences between the stories:

Entry cut

Extended cut

Word count

4,999

10,512

Sex scenes

Pairings

Futa/Futa (incest)

Futa/Male, Futa/Futa (incest)

Kinks/acts

Incest

vanilla sex (futa)

some cum play

light body exploration

petting/fingering defloration

Yuri/girl love

Incest

vanilla sex (futa)

LOTS of cum play

detailed body exploration

petting/fingering

defloration

Yuri/girl love

Bi-curious blowjobs

Doctor exams

pussy-eating

frotting (futa/futa)

anal

...And here it is!!!!

“Mom! I am not sharing a room with Alyssa!” I shouted for what had to be the fiftieth time. Desperation was starting to creep into my voice.

“Casey, you will share your room with your sister, and that’s final!” My mom shot back. “Until your father is finished with her room, you two will have to share! She’s not sleeping on the couch for another night! Not while you have that big bed of yours!”

I sighed my most exasperated sigh and rolled my eyes with such fanfare I could have probably seen the back of my own head. I didn’t care. If she was going to force me to share my room, then I was going to have to force her to put up with my temper.

“Don’t get sassy with me, young lady,” Mom warned, pointing a wooden spoon at me.

“I’m not,” I retorted quickly. “I just think it’s unfair.”

Mom just shook her head and turned, tossing the spoon in a kitchen drawer.

“You girls are old enough to get along civilly for at least a few days. I’m not asking you to be best friends, I just want you to tolerate each other until Alyssa’s room is finished. Your father said he’ll be done by the weekend, latest.”

“Fiiiinnnneeeee…” I sighed, stomping out of the kitchen. “But if she messes up any of my stuff, I’m blaming you!” I couldn’t help adding over my shoulder.

“You’ll have to file a complaint with the department of Sibling Affairs!” Mom quipped back.

Smartass.

I left the kitchen and climbed the stairs to my bedroom, contemplating how much more of a pain in the ass my life was about to become. Alyssa and I were both in high school, but we didn’t have much in common. Sure, we looked similar, like siblings should. Don’t get me wrong, we have our differences; Alyssa’s face was a little more delicate than mine, but I had fuller lips and a cuter button nose than she did. She got the big doe eyes and delicate jaw line, while my eyes were more-or-less normal size and an intriguing shade of light brown. Alyssa smiled easily, lighting up her whole face (and usually the room) when she did, and I was able to pull off a sexy pout when I was in the mood. We both had long, straight, deep-brown hair that liked to whip around when we turned our heads.

Alyssa was a year younger than me, and still looked up to me in that “kid sister” kind of way. It was still annoying though. She was always trying to copy me. She always had to know exactly what I was wearing, who I was talking to, what I was doing...

And that was the real reason I was upset.

You see, ever since puberty hit I had noticed all the changes to my body that I was expecting; I filled out well with perky C-cup breasts, nicely curved hips, and my girlish voice developed a smoky, feminine note, strangely alluring even to me. But I noticed a change that they only briefly mentioned in health class.

I had, somehow, grown a penis.

Yup, I was the 1-in-500 they told us in school that it could happen to. Doctors didn’t really know why or how, but they knew it was a genetic thing, some evolutiona

... more on the forums ...