A Match Made in Heaven - COMPLETE + BONUS CHAPTER + Rewrite chapters 0-10 (10/22/14)

Story by Luvbster

This story is complete. The first version is weirder, includes mad science, and varies between cute, dramatic, and X-rated scenes.

There is also a PG-13 version that I spent quite some time working on. It's obviously much tamer and not explicit, but it's more refined and accessible.

Original sexy version:

Much more polished SFW version:

Thank you to everyone who supported me during the two years I worked on this.  It made a huge difference in my life.

Gratuitous sexy bonus chapter:

The front door to Michelle’s house burst open.  We’d returned from our first date without speaking a word.  Stumbling inside, Michelle struggled to close and lock the entrance; I refused to stop kissing her for any reason.

Somehow she managed with me still clinging to her front.  Her hands free, she grabbed me, slamming me back and pinning me to the wall with her body.  I gasped, but my mouth was instantly covered with hers.  I struggled futilely, our fingers intertwining above my head, almost lifting my off my feet.

I returned the passion with everything I had, kissing her rapidly and everywhere.  I relished her weight on me, her heat spreading through me.  My blood was rushing everywhere; back home I was hard as rocks.  I panted and gasped whenever my mouth was my own.

“My parents aren’t home,” Michelle whispered, letting off just slightly.

“I know,” I replied, using the opportunity to leap up into her arms, mine around her neck, forcing her to carry me.

“We should probably stop,” Michelle said between kisses.

“Yeah, we’re going slow…” I replied, clinging tightly, pressing my lips wherever they could reach.

“No point going to my room,” she added, walking us that way.

“I shouldn’t be feeling you up,” I continued, grinding my crotch into her.

“There’s my bed.”

“We probably shouldn’t get in.”

“We shouldn’t take my dress off.”

“Shouldn’t take my pants off.”

“Shouldn’t pin you to the bed.”

“Shouldn’t unhook your bra.”

“Shouldn’t take this plate off.”

“Wait,” I gasped, finally stopping her.

“What?” she blinked in surprise, fingers pulling back from my crotch, “I thought… I’m sorry…”

I leaned up to kiss her passionately.  “No, you’re definitely right.  Just… leave that on.  I wanna do something new.”

“Oh!” she replied, relieved, “What?”

“Let’s do it like girls.  You know, regular girls.”

She chuckled nervously.  “Oh man, you’re right.  Okay…”

The mood calmed, I peeled off my own shirt and bra, while she slid her panties down.  I let out a soft gasp when I could finally see Michelle in all her glory, kneeling in front of me.  “Wow…”

My eyes traced down her graceful neck, her sloping shoulders, her luscious breasts, her washboard abs, her little patch of fur above her womanhood…  I nearly got lost, happy to stare at that vision of loveliness forever.

When my gaze returned to her face, I was surprised.  She seemed anxious; more so than the first time.  “What’s wrong?” I asked.

“Nothing!” she quickly countered.  I only had to stare at her a moment before she bowed her head.  “Okay… I’m- I’m worried.”

I smiled and moved closer, gently placing my palm on her shoulder; she shivered at the contact.  “Why?” I asked sympathetically, “I’ve seen you like this before.”

“No,” she replied quietly, “That was different.  I’ve shown you a lot more since then.  That was exciting, this…”  She crossed her arms under her breasts.  “I didn’t feel this… naked, then.”

I almost made a snarky comeback, but I could see she was serious.  “Oh Baby,” I soothed, “You’re even more beautiful now.”

Michelle blushed, but smiled at me.  “You’re just saying that.”

I stared back, trying to read every detail of her face, thinking of my next words carefully.  “Michelle,” I soothed, slowly caressing her cheek, moving up to brush her hair aside, “I can’t even imagine of a more wonderful person.  You’re so smart, so strong, so brave… so amazing.  Even after everything we’ve been through… no, BECAUSE of all that, there’s no-one on Earth I’d rather be with.”  She glanced down in embarrassment, but I cupped her face to bring it back up to mine.  “Then I open my eyes, and I see a golden-haired beauty who outshines the sun.”

Her eyes sparkled as she grinned.  “How do you make me so happy?”

“I dunno, Princess,” I stroked her cheek with my thumb, “I guess I just want to.  More than anything.”

She gazed into my eyes.  “I’ve dreamed of this moment,” she whispered back, “Every night.”

I leaned forward, kissing her passionately, eager to make her dreams come true.  I ran my hands up her sides, resting them on those breasts I so loved, massaging them tenderly.  Michelle moaned into my mouth, her head rolled back and I started kissing my way down her neck.

She fell back onto the bed and I fo

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