The Three Curses of Onia Renemede

Story by Magnanimous

I've been planning this one in some form or other for a LONG time.

Naturally, these things never come out exactly as I plan... but I just swallow the doubt back and write them (then post them) anyway.

Yes, I'm sorry for those following it that I haven't done anything with my flash game for a long time, but I haven't abandoned it altogether.

Anyway...

This one.

In the end it will have a Prologue part, Three main parts... and a shorter Epilogue.

I'm gonna try and shove them all into this one post for convenience...

And for now (as of the beginning) I have the prologue and the first main part written... so I'll shove the rest in as I write 'em (I'll try to finish it BEFORE I lose interest)...

Part 1 contains no more than mild masturbation stuff, briefly:

Part 1 : The Girl who said No

She walked proudly. Where she stepped, gazes were drawn. And as she marched down the main street, men stared at her in lust and women were overcome with self-doubt.

Of course everyone loved her. How could they not? Tall, fiery-haired and elegantly curved, she knew herself to be quite without equal. Her every movement projected an absolute assurance of her own worth. To even doubt it would be madness. Ridiculous. Absurdity!

She nearly stumbled. But not quite. Onia Renemede never stumbles! Onia Renemede makes others stumble! Instead, she merely refocused herself.

It was such a silly thing. Not a mote of importance in the grand scheme of things. Afterall, what Onia wants, man or woman, Onia gets! And what she wants, they want too.

So why would that girl have said no? HOW could she have said no?

Obviously she was just shy. Probably uncertain of herself. She just needed a little encouragement, and she was graciously granted it. Onia Renemede is nothing if not patient!

How could she say NO?!

The idol of grace and vibrant beauty, assured though she was, found herself a little put out by the state of affairs. Quickening her pace, she made her way home from work and bathed in the adoring gazes of the passers by.

The girl had been a pretty little thing. Exotic. Black hair and tanned skin. Pert little breasts and a cute curve to her hips. Pouty lips and the blush of the curious. Such a precious little novelty that Onia simply had to have her. So how had it gone wrong?

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Talaika was a curious one. Talaika the gypsy girl. She who had first seen the broken down car near the camp and witnessed the fire-haired goddess who emerged from it. There had been the spark of interest there from that first moment she saw the shimmering green eyes and the vixen's half-smile. And when the men of the camp had gone to help repair the car in a rather uncharacteristic display of charity, Talaika was the one who entertained the guest in their stead.

She had been looking for an excuse to run away. Her grandmother had nothing good to say about the way she gazed at other girls. And so naturally it played out that when the divine Onia Renemede left the gypsy encampment with a working car, she had a new plaything in the passenger seat beside her.

They had talked in the car. They had talked on the steps. They had talked in Onia's apartment. And for all of it, most of the talking had been done by the proud western woman while her pet stayed rapt in fascination.

And they had kissed, and touched, and fondled and eventually made love on the bed. Talaika was thus claimed by the woman six years her senior and superior.

But it wasn't long before things had started to go sour. Onia was very demanding, as she knew she deserved. Talaika was missing the freedom of the outdoors, as she was used to. Onia was rough and Talaika was sensitive. And eventually it all culminated in one quite unpleasant mess.

Onia wanted to fuck Talaika... and Talaika said no.

She said no.

Astounded at not being able to get what she wanted merely by asking, Onia resorted instead to get what she wanted by taking. And her pet, escaping her grasp in the way that lithe young women sometimes can, had ran away to be her pet no more.

Proud though she was, Onia had liked her plaything, and eventually had gone looking fo

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