Learning Curves (Futa/Female, High-School, transform, more tags with each section)

Story by mousie

EDIT (3 JUN 2012)

I wrote this around 10 months ago, and it was not only my first erotic story, but my first fiction writing since around 6th or 7th grade. There's a lot about it that's pretty awful.

But I really like the characters -- Tamara especially, but also lots of the others. And I actually have the thing planned out for quite a long while (I don't have an end in mind, but I'd have at least two "seasons" if it were a TV show).

I'm re-writing some of the old stories, and I have a new one almost done, so I thought I'd bump this up for the moment. For as rough as poorly as some of these stories are written, this is what got me started writing, so I wouldn't mind getting some feedback while I clean things up.

When I "reboot" this series I'll probably start a new thread since some of this is sort of painful for me to look back on (my writing here is pretty rough), and I'd like to be sure to only post finished stories from now on (I'm horrible about leaving things unfinished otherwise)

Ambers (no sex, prologue and character introduction)

((Proofreading note: my spellchecker turned some Ambers into amebas. I'll owe a Moon Pie to anyone who catches one.))

Ambers

The Ambers were the most popular girls in school, by their own admission. Not every girl in that circle was actually named "Amber", but three of them, two of whom made nearly every "most wanted" list had that name. *The* Amber was Amber Royce; she had looks and style, did some modeling for local ads, and once someone had been invited to an Amber Party they had been greenlighted to hang out with or date anyone they wanted. The second Amber in most people's minds was Amber Greenfield, who had had been playing for the Lady Gophers varsity teams in both basketball (fall) and lacrosse (spring) since her freshman year, which was not as much a testament to her ability as it was to how bad the varsity teams at the time were. Amber Greenfield was known as "Aggs" to the Ambers and those who sought their favor, and "Greeny" to the Lady Gophers (along with fans of team and it's two biggest attractions).

As a whole, the Ambers weren't very mean girls, which is probably why the school seemed to like them more and more every year. *The* Amber was only nice to most peers because it got her what she wanted, but part of reason Aggs made varsity so soon was that she had a natural sense of teamwork and fair play, and she put her whole heart into whatever she did. Amber would have preferred to just ignore Aggs and her little group of friends, but by including them the #2 Amber was less likely to advance to #1 status, and it helped show that the real Amber was not as petty as some people claimed. Whatever Amber's other personality flaws might be, she was certainly pragmatic.

The darkhorse challenger for the role of Alpha Amber was Tamara Knight, who was without question the sexiest woman anyone had ever seen. Amber wished it was hyperbole, but the unfortunate truth was that everybody who saw her thought Tamara was the hottest thing ever (though followers of the Ambers would at least have the courtesy to lie and state their preference for an appropriately Amber-approved girl). So powerful was the flame-haired vixen's sexual presence that Amber began hearing the boys talk about her before Tamara herself even graduated from middle school to high school. Tamara Knight was molten hot sex poured into a curvy, five-foot ten-inch mold.

Amber was a year ahead of both Tamara and Amber Greenfield, so when they showed up for their freshman year, the Alpha Amber was already on the look out for the tall, hot, huge-tittied redhead that all the boys coming from Smithson Middle School spoke longingly of. If the stories were true, Tamara first got her huge rack in elementary school, and she was even hot way back then. Such was Tamara's sexual prowess that she had apparently given her virginity to no fewer than 4 different boys at different times, all of whom apparently decided that once you got to know Tamara you'd see she's 100% pure bitch, so they each dumped her. While Amber knew the empty boasts for what they were, the lesson to be taken was that all the boys who claimed to have fucked the allegedly voluptuous fox of a freshman thought that their stories would boost their own standing enough to risk a lie (at least when the supposed vixen wasn't in the high school to defend her reputation).

Amber's first bad impression of her new archival, Amber Greenfield, came because Amber first mistook her for the legendary Tamara Knight. She fit the description the boys all agreed on: a tall redhead with *huge* tits, long legs, and an incredible ass. Amber Greenfield first stepped off the bus cuddling against the arm of a cute older boy, happily chatting with two or three of her little girlfriends -- the new girl obviously had charisma and was bringing a loyal following with her from middle school. While she was certainly hot, the Alpha

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