C Flat, D Sharp (Harem Commission)

Story by swaswj

Commissioned work for Pixy.

This story involves an original futanari character and girls from an eclectic mix of other sources (so far: Final Fantasy VII, Gorillaz, Disgaea, DearS).

C Flat, D Sharp

~Will

The expensive hotel room was extravagantly furnished, with a high ceiling, a large and comfortable L-shaped leather couch in the center of the main room, along with a fancy coffee table and end tables. Spread around the room were several different chairs, including a chaise lounge and a bright blue double papasan chair. The bright red and yellow-splashed walls were covered with fancy paintings and framed pictures, except for one area left clear for the large high-definition projector screen.

Green marble countertops separated the kitchen from the living room, hiding a pair of refrigerators chock full of snacks and drinks. The pantries were similarly stocked, and the freezer had ample stores of ice cream and other frozen treats.

The tranquil atmosphere of the darkened hotel room was permeated by the muffled sounds of excited chatter. A beep echoed from the door as the key card was inserted. The door flew open, lights flicked on. The first girl in the door, a thin figure wearing a white cloak with a childish face on the hood, was cheerfully exclaiming, "... was your best show, yet! People are really starting to notice you, Kady!" Turning her eyes to look at the room, Yuffie exclaimed, "Whoa!"

"Master is the best-nii~!" the next girl in shouted in agreement. The much-shorter girl, in her orange and white jumpsuit, bounded past Yuffie and stared in amazement at the enormous room. "This place is huge-nii~!" she yelled out with a big grin. The paws on her shoes and gloves waved ecstatically as Nia began to rush around the room, finally diving head-first onto the couch.

Guitar strapped to her back, the British-Japanese rock prodigy was next to speak up. "You are very good, Allie," the reed-like young woman said as she strode into the room, wearing her favorite white high-water jeans and tank-top. Her dark violet hair hung down past her shoulders, fringe hanging in front of her eyes. Noodle kicked off her yellow boots as soon as she stepped inside, smirking deviously at the other girls as they marveled at the suite. "You stamped the headline band."

The last of the four finally came into the room, fumbling with her own guitar and her bags. A little taller than Yuffie, the tanned girl had on a pair of comfortable cut-off jean shorts and an oversized blue jumper. Her stark white hair was pulled up into a ponytail; the tips of her bangs and ponytail looked like they had been dipped in bright reddish-orange paint.

Her eyes, a similar golden-red hue, were wide as she looked at her senpai. "Do you really think I did good?" Alkaid asked uncertainly with a noticeable British accent. She walked in and looked around the room herself, amazed. Allie had asked for the biggest room, but this was big enough to play football in!

Nia ran past, nearly knocking Allie off her feet, and shut the door that the young musician had left open. "I got the door for you, master-nii~!" she announced cheerfully, before skipping off, dutifully missing the fact that Allie was struggling with her bags.

"Cool digs, Kady!" Yuffie called out, already raiding the kitchen. Her moogle cloak had been discarded on the floor already, revealing a simple pair of tan shorts, missing their button, and a green tank-top. Her orange sneakers had been unceremoniously kicked in the living room, leaving just her puffy white socks. "Catch!"

Allie's eyes widened slowly as the can of soda came toward her in a smooth, upright flight. Unsure how to react, the girl nearly dropped her guitar before thinking better of it. She let out a worried noise and closed her eyes before the can hit her.

There was a firm slapping sound. Allie opened her eyes, smiling a bit to see that Noodle grabbed the can. "Thank you, teach. If that pop hit me, I might ha' been knocked straight in hospital with a coma. Then you would all wear nurse uniforms and hold a charity chip-eating contest to get everyone to..."

"Nice catch, Nudoru," Yuffie called out. "Here's one for you, too!"

"'sank you," the rock star called back, catching the second can.

Nia stretched her arms out from across the room. "Oh, oh, throw me one-nii~!"

Yuffie lifted her arm to throw then thought better of it. Laughing, she shook her head. "Come over here and get it! You'll just drop it, squirt!" Glancing over, the girl's grey-violet eyes widened. "Yo, you need some help over there, Kade-chan?"

The taller girl, straining to hang on to all of the bags and her guitar and a suitcase, nodded quickly. Nia bounced up, holding her hands out for her drink. Yuffie flicked the younger girl in the forehead. "What are you thinking? Go help her first!" With that, the brunette pop

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