A Welcome Change: Part 1 ROUGH DRAFT (strange futa/f, mind control, catgirl, multi)

Story by rutheni

Contains unconventional futa, masturbation, transformation, multiple body parts (implied ears, shown heads, breasts, and technically an extra shoulder, though that's never mentioned), mind control, catgirl, futa/f, dicknipple, tailcock, and probably a few other things besides (EDIT: such as oral). And all at just over 1000 words :-/

I thought this was a bit short, but I'd gotten to a stopping point, so I figured I'd just get something out here. This is crossposted from my writing blog, and a rough draft. Any critique would be appreciated. (I'll try to have something up at my blog every week, but it won't necessarily be 'enough' for me to post anything here.)

(Also, sorry about the text size, if it's wonky. I have no idea what's causing that.)

Nobody was sure quite what had happened in the city of Fulton that day, around lunchtime. But, the outside world did know that some the residents insisted that they were completely safe to be around. With some poking and prodding, those in power agreed, and the odd beings were allowed to roam freely.

One such being was RachJen, who looked like a perfectly normal young woman. She had blue eyes, medium-length, straight, dark hair, lightly tanned skin, two heads, and three breasts. Psychological evaluations on each of RachJen's heads had revealed nothing out-of-the-ordinary, to the extent that 'ordinary' existed. Since the heads both tested 'sane', they were allowed to visit Brickham, the city just north of Fulton. 'Asked' would be more accurate, since simply speculating about the Change did nothing to explain any aspect of it. As such, RachJen had been through many medical exams, and would go through many more. On the day of one particular exam...

RachJen walked up to the intersection. A small clump of people crowded a short distance away, since the Changed were not yet a common sight, and RachJen’s strange form aroused

curiosity.

Each of RachJen’s heads looked its respective direction, and brought the hand on its side of the body up to brush back medium-length black hair. “Jen?” the right asked. “Rach?” the left did likewise. “Good to go?” “Yep.” they walked across. The crowd stayed behind. After all, it would just be rude to follow them around.

In due course, RachJen reached the university's medical school, the staff of which had performed many tests. Most people there just couldn't believe that anything that did as much as the Change had could somehow avoid giving any of the Changed cancer, or whatever. Today, RachJen's breasts were the focus of investigation.

"Okay," today's designated poker and prodder said, "I can't find any unusual lumps or swelling. Disregarding number, your breasts are perfectly healthy and normal."

RachJen stared fixedly at her, with two left eyes, and two right eyes, and two eyes, with a glow running through the colors of the rainbow, set in the middle of the foreheads. Those eyes weren't normally there. The third ones, that is. As one, RachJen told her, "That's good news, but are you sure about the middle one? I think there's some swelling, right around the nipple." Her right hand ran lightly over the fleshy globe, tracing a line on the surface—the tropic of cancer? (Author's Note: I will find this either hilarious or horribly wrong in the morning, and I can't tell which. (Author's Note: it's been like, at least a week, and I'm still not sure.)) RachJen sighed at the touch, but did not break third eye contact. "Oh! Right there! Feel how hard it is? That's not normal, is it?"

Frances, for that was her name, didn't answer for a moment. Then: "I'm not sure what it is. I'll have to take a closer look." She moved her head in closer; both of RachJen's heads tilted down to follow.

"It's no trouble at all. You've been very gentle so far. It's almost been... enjoyable." RachJen waited a moment. "Can you tell what's happening?"

"It's the nipple itself." Frances breathed softly over the nipple in question. "It seems to be lengthening and thickening. I've never heard of anything like it. Is it part of the Change?"

RachJen smiled. "My Change, and yours. Oop! Forget I said that."

"All right. This doesn't look... the aureole itself is getting bigger, to accommodate the increased thickness. I think there are veins on t

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